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For #SixWordStories's 52 Week Six Word Story Challenge - retell a famous story
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The death of Achilles in Ovid's Metamorphoses.
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Ooh, I really like the approach to the challenge here! It's a pretty awesome way of describing the famous story... great title, too.
You could use a variety of punctuation to emphasise your point, I guess... for me, putting a full stop after Invincible and then having ellipses before the "no" would work just as fine as ~MissMurderFish's suggestion.
This piece is great, though.
You could use a variety of punctuation to emphasise your point, I guess... for me, putting a full stop after Invincible and then having ellipses before the "no" would work just as fine as ~MissMurderFish's suggestion.
This piece is great, though.